Nov. 22nd, 2010

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A bit of history:  The Broken Masquerade was a story I started writing when I had first been overcome with writer's block on Taking Sights. I never finished this fic for a number of reasons: I didn't know enough about HP canon to write anything without doing a lot of research first, I discovered Avatar: The Last Airbender and got sucked into that fandom, and I started writing Facing Fearful Odds. But mostly? I stopped writing it because I realized I had no story to tell. I had a lot of fun doing the worldbuilding for a post-revelation world with wizards and muggles living together, but I didn't have any sort of unified character plot to tell.

So here's what I wrote of The Broken Masquerade, alongside occasional comments {in brackets} to elaborate things.

Summary: In 1981, Peter Pettigrew framed Sirius Black for a crime he did not commit by blowing up twelve people on a Muggle street. It was a cunning plan, and it would have worked perfectly if Peter hadn't unknowingly done it in front of a television news crew broadcasting live on the BBC. The year is now 1991. Harry Potter has just received his Hogwarts letter. What sort of world does he live in?


ExpandPrologue + Chapter 1 )
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Forewarning on this chapter: you can start to see the fic creaking under the weight of the exposition I was in love with. Also, any scene with the children was pretty much written on the fly and never beta'd. I had no idea what to do with the kids' plotline, which is what eventually killed the fic...

ExpandPart 3 )
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These aren't whole chapters anymore but just bits and pieces. The fic had died at this point.

ExpandLast Part, consisting of odds and ends )
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So my NaNoWriMo efforts imploded (again) but I've finally gotten past the plotting problems that derailed my work on Chapter 3 of Full Metal Bitch for so long. The solution was actually pretty simple in retrospect, amounting to reversing a single line of dialogue between Aang and Zuko. The chapter currently stands at 4 completed scenes (of 10) and 3200 words. Chapter 4 is currently at 1900 words and will cover events between Bitter Work and The Library. Also, I'm thinking there will now be eight chapters total instead of just five. 


If you have some free time, be sure to check out a new AtLA fic called Lost a Long Time Ago by clockworkchaos. It's pretty great.

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