WHY?! Why won't you die, Chapter 5-A?!?!

Today's project is FINISHING (for realzz) this complete and total goddamn overhaul of Chapter 5-A of Facing Fearful Odds, AKA MICHAEL MYERS OF CHAPTERS THAT WON'T DIE.

Starting word count is: 10,499

Scene 1, Wake up call: COMPLETE
Scene 2, Fun run: COMPLETE
Scene 3, For the children: COMPLETE
Scene 4, Rambo, First Blood: COMPLETE
Scene 5, What: COMPLETE
Scene 6, Boomerang: COMPLETE
Scene 7, Snowball: COMPLETE
Scene 8, The Avatar's Duty: COMPLETE
Scene 9, Peculiar: MINOR WORK NEEDED COMPLETE
Scene 10, Crossover: MAJOR WORK NEEDED COMPLETE
Scene 11, Dueling Banjos: COMPLETE
Scene 12, Into the mist: MAJOR WORK NEEDED MINOR WORK NEEDED COMPLETE
Scene 13: Enter the dragon: COMPLETE

Goal for 8:30am -- Complete Scene 9
Goal for 9:40am -- Upgrade Scene 10 to 'Minor Work Needed'
Goal for 10:10am -- Upgrade Scene 12 to 'Minor Work Needed'
* * * break for RL stuff * * *
Goal for 12:47pm -- Complete Scene 12
Goal for 1:00pm -- COMPLETE SCENE 12!
* * * DING-DONG THE WITCH IS DEAD!! (1:19pm)