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Date: 2009-04-11 08:52 pm (UTC)
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Well I like what you've done so far. You've turned TS Asuka into a character the reader actually cares about because we know more about her. In canon she breaks later and only rebuilds herself at the very very end. In TS she breaks earlier but hopefully becomes stronger earlier too. In TS Shinji is becoming the more disposable/unlikable character even though we know more about him in TS then in canon. I like this story and how you change stuff around and keep everyone guessing, it's refreshing.
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