My Good Omens / Evangelion crossover, Ch.1

[lavanya_six]

Here's the complete, first chapter of "The Ineffable Crossover", my Good Omens / Evangelion crossover.

Feel free to review at FFnet or to comment below.

Comments

[blueinkedlines.livejournal.com]

I don't mean to sound like a pain in the ass, but I did notice an error you might want to use find and replace (Ctrl + H) on. Whenever you mention the black-robed figure, you write 'robed' as 'robbed'.

Other than that, this is all kinds of awesome. =)

[lavanyasix.livejournal.com]

Fixed. Thanks for the heads up.