Die, Chapter 5-A, DIE!!

Today's project is FINISHING this complete and total goddamn overhaul of Chapter 5-A of Facing Fearful Odds, AKA Chapter THE BANE OF MY EXISTENCE .

Starting word count is: 9,840

Scene 1, Wake up call: COMPLETE
Scene 2, Fun run: COMPLETE
Scene 3, For the children: MINOR WORK NEEDED COMPLETE
Scene 4, Rambo, First Blood: MINOR WORK NEEDED COMPLETE
Scene 5, What: COMPLETE
Scene 6, Boomerang: COMPLETE
Scene 7, Snowball: MINOR WORK NEEDED COMPLETE
Scene 8, The Avatar's Duty: MAJOR WORK NEEDED MINOR WORK NEEDED COMPLETE
Scene 9, Peculiar: MINOR WORK NEEDED
Scene 10, Not a toy: MAJOR WORK NEEDED
Scene 11, Dueling Banjos: COMPLETE
Scene 12, Into the mist: MAJOR WORK NEEDED
Scene 13: Enter the dragon: COMPLETE

Goal for 10:00am -- Complete Scenes 3 and 7
Goal for 10:30am -- Complete Scene 4
 * * * break to cut grass, shower, lunch * * * 
Goal for 1:00pm -- Complete Scene 7
* * * work break, tries to fix internet connection -- fails * * *
Goal for 2:20pm -- Upgrade Scene 8 to 'Minor Work Needed'
Goal for 2:50pm -- Complete Scene 8
* * *  nap so I don't fall asleep at the movie tonight* * *
Goal for 5:45pm -- Finish off Scene 8
* * * off to see Inglourious Basterds, then back to writing sleeeeep * * *