No problem! Glad you found them useful. (To be entirely honest, the scene triggered flashbacks to my own Midwestern adolescence--it just felt too familiar to be Japanese.)
The funny thing is, McDonald's actually serves real food in the rest of the world, because it legally can't get away with serving the reconstituted frozen crap the FDA lets pass...
As for extras, you don't need to make an effort to put them in for my sake! If 1-1 or 1-1-1 feels more natural to you, do what seems right and maintains narrative flow.
I'm sure you've had plenty of offers, but if you want a pair of eyes to proofread drafts (I guess the kool kids call it "beta-ing fic" these days) I'd be more than happy to help.
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The funny thing is, McDonald's actually serves real food in the rest of the world, because it legally can't get away with serving the reconstituted frozen crap the FDA lets pass...
As for extras, you don't need to make an effort to put them in for my sake! If 1-1 or 1-1-1 feels more natural to you, do what seems right and maintains narrative flow.
I'm sure you've had plenty of offers, but if you want a pair of eyes to proofread drafts (I guess the kool kids call it "beta-ing fic" these days) I'd be more than happy to help.